Based on the feedback from our Design Proposal, the Tools and Suggestions, and assignment Rubric, I have the following suggestions.
This is the actual artifact, our WordPress/BuddyPress/BBPress Collaboration Site. It needs to have the following elements:
1) “Strong awareness of the learners”
I assume this to mean is student-centred and attends to the need that we laid out in our proposal. We received a mark of “Excellent” on our design focus, so I feel we can stick to our original plan
2) “The interactivites are appropriate and innovative for the learners.”
The comments on this were a bit confusing. She indicates that our interactivities are “appropriate” and a “good fit between objectives and plan for object”. Somehow we score lower on “achievable scope” “appropriate plan” and “clear design plan”. I don’t know what this means.
3) “The design creatively integrates appropriate technology.”
In her comments on the proposal, Diane said “…I like the online collaboration idea – you are on the right track…D”